One of the ‘red flags’ or big concerns for a committee are signs that a student lacks engagement with the University generally. You need to reassure the committee that you are willing and able to do what it takes to succeed.
Your response should directly engage with any comments on your Student Record Card that relate to your academic progress. This record contains important information about your results, and any past progress issues, including recommendations and other outcomes from previous meetings. Considering and addressing any of the issues outlined in this record will help demonstrate to the committee that you appreciate the situation fully. If you have difficulty accessing the Academic Progress portal after following the directions in your 'Show Cause' notice, and have an approaching deadline, you should email the Academic Progress team at the University directly: academic-progress@unimelb.edu.au.
Read your Student Record Card carefully for anything that relates to academic progress so you can address this either in your letter or in the meeting. Look for a heading ‘Sanction(s)’, it will say something like:
Hold - Academic Progress Review - Effective Date ...
Study Package: B-COM
Reason: Unsatisfactory progress
If you were invited to meet with an adviser in an ‘At Risk’ meeting, your Student Record Card will note this and if you attended the meeting or not. If you did, any recommended actions will be recorded and look like this:
Student attended At Risk appointment
Student cited reasons for being 'At Risk' as: lack of motivation and ineffective study skills and personal/emotional issues.
Self-identified the need for more structured study schedule.
Recommended: make an appointment with a counsellor and accessing online resources from CAPS; attending 'Time Management Essentials' and 'Overcoming Procrastination' workshops.
If you did not respond to your ‘At Risk’ notification, it is really important you explain why, as well as provide some details about your situation. If you did respond to it, you need to outline how you implemented the recommendations or outline why they were perhaps not specific enough or helpful to you, explaining what you did instead.
We recommend using our template to get started.
The University’s Academic Progress website provides further information.